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Sunday, August 24, 2014
The Accident- Sample Writing
This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write a story… This is Katana''s interpretation of the pictures.
Hi Katana,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic piece of Writing. You described the pictures in great detail.
Your next step is to focus on the "tense" of the story. At the start you are in first person. Then the story is written in third person.
Great Work,